REMAINING WRITING TASKS (PART 6 TO 10)


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William H. Gates is a famous businessman, but most people call him Bill. He is the chairman of Microsoft Corporation. His company makes computer programs. He likes reading, golf, and driving fast cars. He also likes computers. Every day, he gets 4 million email messages! But most of the messages are spam. He writes about 100 emails every day, because he doesn’t like talking on the phone. Bill Gates gives a lot of money to help schools and hospitals. He lives in Seattle with his wife and three children. (89 words) 2

Alif Ramadhani is a famous businessman, but most people call him Alif. He is the distributor of K-Link International. His company provides healthy needs. He likes reading, swimming, and cooking. He also likes computers. Every day, he gets 4 million email messages! But most of the messages are spam. He writes about 100 emails every day, because he doesn’t like talking on the phone. Bill Gates gives a lot of money to help schools and hospitals. He lives in Seattle with his wife and three children.(86 words) 2



Alif Ramadhani is a famous businessman, but most people call him Alif. He is the distributor of K-Link International. His company provides healthy needs. He likes reading, swimming, and cycling. He also likes computers. Every day, he gets 4 million email messages! But most of the messages are spam. He writes about 100 emails every day, because he doesn’t like talking on the phone. Alif gives a lot of money to help schools and hospitals. He lives in Jakarta with his wife and three children. (85 words) 2


Alif Ramadhani is a famous businessman, but the majority people call him Alif. He is the distributor of K-Link International. His corporation provides healthy needs. He likes reading, swimming, and cycling. He also likes computers. Every day, he gets 4 million news item messages! But most of the messages are spam. He writes about 100 emails every day, because he doesn’t like talking on the phone. Alif gives a lot of money to help schools and hospitals. He lives in Jakarta with his wife and three kids. (87 words) 2









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Oprah Winfrey is a TV star and actor. People watch her TV talk show, the Oprah Winfrey Show, in more than 35 countries. She also makes movies, and she works to help schools and hospitals in poor countries. She has houses in California and Hawaii. She has a boyfriend, but she doesn’t have children. In her free time, Oprah likes reading, cooking, and playing with her dogs. Her favorite food is chocolate, and she doesn’t like beef. She thinks it isn’t healthy.(82 words)2

Alif Ramadhani is a Boy Scout and teacher. People know his courses, the Alif English Courses, in more than 35 countries. He also makes books, and he works to help schools and hospitals in poor countries. He has houses in Pontianak and Arofah. He has a beautiful wife, and he has three children. In his free time, Alif likes reading, cooking, and playing with his tame owl bird. His favorite food is egg, and he doesn’t like banana. He thinks it is smelly fruit. (84 words)2

Alif Ramadhani is a Boy Scout and teacher. People know his courses, the Alif English Courses, in more than 35 countries. He also makes books, and he works to help schools and hospitals in poor countries. He has houses in Pontianak and Arofah. He has a beautiful wife, and he has three children. In his free time, Alif likes reading, cycling, and playing with his tame owl bird. His favorite food is egg, and he doesn’t like banana. He thinks it is smelly fruit.(84 words)2
Alif Ramadhani is a Boy Scout and teacher. Public are familiar with his courses, the Alif English Courses, in more than 35 countries. He also makes books, and he facilities to help schools and hospitals in poor countries. He has houses in Pontianak, Jakarta and Arofah. He has a beautiful wife, and he has three children. In his free time, Alif likes reading, cycling, and playing with his tame owl bird. His favorite fruit is apple, and he doesn’t like banana. He thinks it is smelly fruit. (87 words)2















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Tiger Woods is the greatest athlete in the world today. He learned how to play golf when he was only three years old, and he won his first tournament when he was eight. He won every important golf championship in the world many times. Every year he gives money to sports programs for poor children, and he teaches kids to play golf. I admire Tiger Woods very much.(68 words)43

Alif Rmadhani is the greatest teacher in the world today. He learned how to teach students when he was only eighteen years old, and he taught his first courses when he was twenty. He taught every important course in the world many times. Every year he gives money to educational programs for poor children, and he teaches kids to share what they’ve learned. I admire Alif Ramadhani very much.(69 words)43

Alif Rmadhani is the greatest teacher in the world today. He learned how to teach students when he was only eighteen years old, and he taught his first courses when he was twenty. He taught every important course in the world many times. Every year he gives money to the educational programs for poor children, and he teaches kids to share what they’ve learned. I admire Alif Ramadhani very much.(70 words)43

Alif Rmadhani is the best teacher in the world nowadays. He learned how to teach students when he was only eighteen years old, and he taught his first courses when he was twenty. He taught every significant course in the world several times. Each year he gives funds to the educational programs for underprivileged children, and he teaches kids to share what they’ve learned. I respect Alif Ramadhani very much. (70 words)43
















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Students of all ages are taking more online classes. They read their lessons, do their homework, and even take examinations at the end of the course through a special website. If they have questions, they can correspond with their instructor by email. In some countries, students are even earning university degrees without leaving their home.(55 words)44

Students of all ages are taking more online classes. They read their lessons, do their homework, and even take examinations at the end of the course through a special website. If they have questions, they can correspond with their instructor by email. In some countries, students are even earning university degrees without leaving their home. (55 words)44

Students of all ages are taking more online lessons. They read their lessons, do their homework, and even take examinations at the last part of the course through a particular website. If they have questions, they can communicate with their tutor by electronic mail. In a number of countries, students are even earning university degrees with no leaving their domicile. (60 words)44

Students of all ages are taking more online lessons. They read their lessons, do their homework, and even take examinations at the last part of the course throughout a particular website. If they have questions, they can communicate with their tutor by electronic mail. In a number of countries, students are even earning institution of higher education degrees with no leaving their domicile. (63 words)44
















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I really love my grandmother’s kitchen. It’s very small and crowded, but it has a big sunny window with lots of plants. She makes bread almost every day, and you can smell it baking. The room is always warm from cooking. She likes to listen to the radio in the kitchen, but she can’t hear very well, so the music is very loud! And when the bread is ready, she always gives me a piece before dinner. That hot bread is the most delicious thing in the world. I’m always happy to go to my grandmother’s house for dinner.(99 words) 49

I really love my grandmother’s kitchen. It’s very small and crowded, but it has a big sunny window with lots of plants. She makes “mendoan” almost every day, and you can smell it cooking. The room is always warm from cooking. She likes to listen to the radio in the kitchen, but she can’t hear very well, so the music is very loud! And when the “mendoan” is ready, she always gives me a piece before dinner. That hot “mendoan” is the most delicious thing in the world. I’m always happy to go to my grandmother’s house for dinner.(99 words) 49


I am really in love with my grandmother’s kitchen. It’s very big and deserted, and it has a big bright windowpane with plenty of plants. She makes “mendoan” just about every day, and you can smell it cooking. The space is all the time warm from cooking. She likes to listen to the radio in the kitchen, nevertheless she can’t hear very well, so the song is very loud! And when the “mendoan” is prepared, she constantly gives me a piece before dinner. That warm “mendoan” is the most delicious thing in the world. I’m always joyful to go to my grandmother’s residence for banquet. (105 words) 49


I am truly in love with my grandmother’s kitchen. It’s very big and full, and it has a big bright windowpane with plenty of plants. She makes “mendoan” just about every day, and you can smell it cooking. The space is all the time warm from cooking. She likes to listen to the radio in the kitchen, nevertheless she can’t hear very well, so the song is very loud! And when the “mendoan” is prepared, she constantly gives me a piece before dinner. That warm “mendoan” is the tastiest thing in the world. I’m always joyful to visit my grandmother’s residence for banquet. (103 words) 49







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During my first year at the university, my biggest problem was that I had no energy. I was always tired, and on weekends I slept all day. So I talked to my doctor, and she gave me some good advice. First, I started going to bed earlier every night. If my homework wasn’t finished, I got up early to study. After that, I changed my diet. I ate breakfast every day before I went to class, and I had a big salad for lunch. Later, I started an exercise program. Every night after dinner, I went for a long walk to relax and get away from my books. The exercise made me feel a lot better. I’ve kept all these habits for three years now, and I have enough energy for everything I need to do.(136 words) 73

During my first year at the university, my biggest problem was that I had no energy. I was always tired, and on weekends I slept all day. So I talked to my doctor, and she gave me some good advice. First, I started going to bed earlier every night. If my homework wasn’t finished, I got up early to study. After that, I changed my diet. I ate breakfast every day before I went to class, and I had a big salad for lunch. Later, I started an exercise program. Every night after dinner, I went for a long walk to relax and get away from my books. The exercise made me feel a lot better. I’ve kept all these habits for three years now, and I have enough energy for everything I need to do.(136 words) 73

During my former year at the university, my major difficulty was that I had no power. I was always worn-out, and on weekends I slept the entire day. So I talked to my physician, and she gave me several excellent advices. First, I started going to bed earlier all nighttime. If my homework wasn’t completed, I got up early to learn. After that, I changed my diet. I ate breakfast each day before I went to course group, and I had a full-size salad for lunch. Later, I started a workout plan. Every night after dinner, I went for a long walk to loosen up and get away from my books. The exercise made me feel a lot healthier. I’ve kept all these way of life for three years now, and I have adequate energy for everything I need to do. (141 words)73

In my former year at the campus, my major difficulty was that I had no power. I was always worn-out, and on weekends I slept the entire day. So I talked to my physician, and she gave me several excellent advices. First, I started going to bed earlier all nighttime. If my homework wasn’t completed, I got up early on to learn. After that, I changed my diet. I ate breakfast each day before I went to course group, and I had a full-size salad for lunch. Later, I started a workout plan. Every night following dinner, I went for a lengthy walk to loosen up and get away from my books. The exercise made me feel a lot healthier. I’ve set aside all these way of life for three years now, and I have adequate energy for the whole thing I should do. (144 words)73





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MY HOMETWON
I’m from Milwaukee, a city in the northern United States. A lot of people assume that my home town isn’t very interesting, but it’s actually a great place to visit. For one thing, it has a beautiful lakeshore along Lake Michigan. We enjoy swimming, sailing, and running on the beach. It has also has some of the most beautiful and famous parks in the whole country. You can see plants from both the dessert and the rain forest in our botanical garden. Finally, summer fest, our summer music festival, is very famous. There are concerts by great bands every night for ten days in July. Most visitors really enjoy Milwaukee.(110 words)7

MY HOMETWON
I’m from Jakarta, a city in the java island. A lot of people assume that my home town is very interesting, and it’s actually a great place to visit. For one thing, it has a beautiful view along Ancol beach. We enjoy swimming, sailing, and running on the beach. It has also has some of the most beautiful and famous places in the whole country. You can see Monas, Istiqlal from roads that you pass. Finally, holiday fest, our holiday music festival, is very famous. There are concerts by great bands every night in holiday. Most visitors really enjoy Jakarta.(100 words)7
MY HOMETWON
I’m from Jakarta, a metropolitan in Java Island. A lot of citizens presume that my home town is incredibly fascinating, and it’s truly a great place to stay. For one thing, it has an attractive view alongside Ancol beach. We take pleasure in swimming, sailing, and running on the coastline. It has also has several of the most gorgeous and renowned places in the whole countryside. You can see Monas, Istiqlal from roads that you pass. Finally, holiday fest, our holiday music festival, is very prominent. There are concerts by great bands every night in holiday. Most guests really have the benefit of Jakarta. (104 words)7

MY HOMETWON
I’m from Jakarta, a metropolitan in Java Island. A lot of citizens presume that my hometown is incredibly fascinating, and it’s truly a huge place to stay. For one thing, it has an attractive view alongside Ancol beach. We take pleasure in swimming, sailing, and running on the coastline. It has also has several of the most gorgeous and renowned places in the whole countryside. You can notice Monas, Istiqlal from roads that you pass. Finally, holiday fest, our holiday music festival, is very prominent. There are concerts by enormous bands all night in holiday. Most guests actually have the benefit of Jakarta. (103 words)7







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MY FAVORITE RESTAURANT
I’ll never forget my lunch at a little restaurant called Mama Rosa’s café, on a beach in Mexico. The sun was very hot at noon, so I decided to eat lunch there. Inside, it was cool and shady. It was a simple restaurant, with three small tables and hard, uncomfortable chairs. But Mama Rosa gave me a big smile when I tried to speak Spanish. The wind from the sea was soft and warm, and the palm trees made a gentle sound as the breeze passed through the leaves. In the kitchen, the radio played reggae songs, and Mama Rosa talked and laughed with the cook. I waited, and waited, and waited. The food smelled spicy and delicious, and I was so hungry. Finally, after almost an hour, my lunch was served. It was so good! The fish was sweet and delicate, and it was cooked just right. “Please come back and visit us again,” Mama Rosa said. It was the best meal of my life.(166 words)13






MY FAVORITE RICE SHOP
I’ll never forget my lunch at a little rice shop called Babe’s café, at Pesangrahan Street in Ciputat. The sun was very hot at noon, so I decided to eat lunch there. Inside, it was cool and shady. It was a simple rice shop, with three small tables and hard, uncomfortable chairs. But Babe gave me a big smile when I tried to speak Sundanese. The wind from outside was soft and warm, and the palm trees made a gentle sound as the breeze passed through the leaves. In the kitchen, the radio played pop songs, and Babe talked and laughed with the cook. I waited, and waited, and waited. The food smelled spicy and delicious, and I was so hungry. Finally, after almost an hour, my lunch was served. It was so good! The chicken was sweet and delicate, and it was cooked just right. “Please come back and visit us again,” Babe said. It was the best meal of my life. (163 words)13

MY FAVORITE RICE SHOP
I’ll never forget my lunch at a small rice shop called Babe’s café, at Pesangrahan Street in Ciputat. The sun was very hot at noon, so I determined to eat lunch there. Inside, it was fresh and out of the sun. It was an easy rice shop, with three small tables and solid, uncomfortable seats. However Babe gave me a big grin when I tried to speak Sundanese. The wind from outside was soft and warm, and the palm trees made a gentle sound as the breeze passed through the leaves. In the kitchen, the radio played pop songs, and Babe talked and laughed with the cook. I waited, and waited, and waited. The food smelled peppery and yummy, and I was so hungry. Finally, after almost an hour, my lunch was served. It was so excellent! The chicken was sweet and delicate, and it was cooked just right. “Please come back and visit us again,” Babe said. It was the finest meal of my life.(166 words)13

MY FAVORITE RICE SHOP
I’ll never overlook my lunch at a small rice shop called Babe’s café, at Pesangrahan Street in Ciputat. The sun was very warm at noon, so I determined to eat lunch there. Inside, it was fresh and out of the sun. It was an easy rice shop, with three small tables and solid, rough seats. However Babe gave me a big grin when I tried to speak Sundanese. The breeze from outside was soft and warm, and the palm trees made a gentle sound as the wind passed through the leaves. In the kitchen, the radio played pop songs, and Babe talked and laughed with the cook. I waited, and waited, and waited. The food smelled peppery and yummy, and I was so hungry. At last, after almost an hour, my lunch was served. It was so excellent! The chicken was sweet and slight, and it was cooked just right. “Please come back and visit us again,” Babe said. It was the finest meal of my life. (167 words)13






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