This is my first draft of 1
My child’s life was grateful. I was born in Jakarta in 1989. The time was Ramadan and I was the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It meant “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents who were too busy did not have a baby sitter to take care of me, so they put me on my grand ma’s house in Java for taking care of me. I lived with my grand ma for about five years. I used to play with my cousin and other friends there, I was really glad to have friends like they were, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It was my child’s life. (129 words)
This is my second draft of 1
My child’s life was grateful. I was born in Jakarta 1989. The time was Ramadhan. I am the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It means “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents were very busy to take care of me and did not have a baby sitter, so they put me on my grandma’s house in Java for taking care of me. I lived with my grandma for five years. I used to play with my cousin and friends, I was really glad to have friends like them, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It is my childhood. (120 words)
This is my third draft of 1
My childhood was grateful. I was born in Jakarta 1989. The time was Ramadhan. I am the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It means “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents were very busy to take care of me and did not have a baby sitter, so they put me on my grandma’s house in Java to take care of me. I lived with my grandma for five years. I used to play with my cousin and friends, I was really glad to have friends like them, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It was my childhood. (119 words)
My child’s life was grateful. I was born in Jakarta in 1989. The time was Ramadan and I was the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It meant “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents who were too busy did not have a baby sitter to take care of me, so they put me on my grand ma’s house in Java for taking care of me. I lived with my grand ma for about five years. I used to play with my cousin and other friends there, I was really glad to have friends like they were, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It was my child’s life. (129 words)
This is my second draft of 1
My child’s life was grateful. I was born in Jakarta 1989. The time was Ramadhan. I am the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It means “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents were very busy to take care of me and did not have a baby sitter, so they put me on my grandma’s house in Java for taking care of me. I lived with my grandma for five years. I used to play with my cousin and friends, I was really glad to have friends like them, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It is my childhood. (120 words)
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This is my third draft of 1
My childhood was grateful. I was born in Jakarta 1989. The time was Ramadhan. I am the first child of my parents, so my parents gave ALIF RAMADHANI for my name. It means “THE FIRST CHILD IN RAMADAN”. Unfortunately, my parents were very busy to take care of me and did not have a baby sitter, so they put me on my grandma’s house in Java to take care of me. I lived with my grandma for five years. I used to play with my cousin and friends, I was really glad to have friends like them, but my parents took me home to continue my elementary school in Jakarta. Now, I really miss them. It was my childhood. (119 words)
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Dwi Prayogo 108026000031
Adhie Satya 108026000034
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